Just pondering and postulating, O
quondam quaffer of pink gins,
the section on the Compass (p2, #16):
might it make it more obvious if we instead of the bottom paragraph
† In order for stations to become manually selectable the Advanced Space Compass equipment is required to be installed.
there was a thin rule between the first row showing the planet and the remaining rows showing the rest with
this immediately underneath the thin rule:
Additional ASC targets (selectable with the "\", "#", "shift \" buttons)
Government Guide (p3)
a) Maybe replace "Risk" with "Piracy"? And add a note underneath about the likelihood of infestation of safer systems from local pirate-ridden ones?
b) Any chance of using the colours from the F6 screen (as on your XenonUI.oxp)?
Commodities Guide (p3)
Maybe squeeze in the filter and sort options for the F8 screen underneath (if there is space)?
Filter ("?"): all 17>goods in station or ship>in station>in ship>legal>illegal
Sort ("/"): default (Classic Elite)>alphabetic>cost>station quantity>ship quantity>unit mass
Economy Guide (p3)
a) Is there any relationship whatsoever between these descriptions and what we actually find in the vanilla game?
ie:
"Basic technology and Advance (d?) Materials" - are these
really more common in the poorer industrial economies? (Alloys? Machinery? Luxuries?)
"Advanced organics and Refined Materials" - are these
really more common in the richer agricultural economies? (Narcotics?)
b) Any chance of using the (bland) colours from the F6 screen (as on your XenonUI.oxp)?
Blank space under Govt/Economy Guides (p3)
How about a note on the psychedelic cycling options for the F6 screen (Sun Colour>Economy type>Govt Type>Tech level)?
Anchorage pictures (p8)
Shrink the Rock Hermit a little? Unlike for the ships, no dimensions are given...
Other Objects pictures (p8)
If you think the Witchcloud is looking lonely, you might also add a snapshot of the Witchspace tunnel...
Credits Box (p8)
This work is not easy (I know... I tried!) ... you really ought to include yourself in the box!
And on the line beneath each page.
Oolite Reference Sheet by the Admiral of the White, Sir Nick of the Navigable Nightmares/Phkb etc. Based on KZ9999's original.
Or some such.