Whilst clearing out some old kit I found some partially completed ooliterature that I was working on 3 or4 years ago. Normally I just bin this stuff but this time I though I'd have a bash at finishing it and letting you poor people "enjoy" it.
So, I suppose I'm proud to present Static - http://int13h.com/downloads/static.pdf
Static
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Static
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Evil Genius
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So considerate of you, Spooky... thanks!Spooky wrote:letting you poor people "enjoy" it.
Nice little tale, btw... trouble is, it's now got me thinking about a first-person tale... bugger!
I would advise stilts for the quagmires, and camels for the snowy hills
And any survivors, their debts I will certainly pay. There's always a way!
And any survivors, their debts I will certainly pay. There's always a way!
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Thanks EV. Stop thinking, start writing... please...Nice little tale, btw... trouble is, it's now got me thinking about a first-person tale... bugger!
Great! Just noticed a load of mistakes... Bugger
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Heh... I'm currently halfway through a twice-abandoned and re-written wip... that's why I don't need to be thinking about another tale.Spooky wrote:Stop thinking, start writing... please...
I have to admit that the first person perspective is very seductive, though... next year, maybe.
<smirks>Spooky wrote:Just noticed a load of mistakes... Bugger
I would advise stilts for the quagmires, and camels for the snowy hills
And any survivors, their debts I will certainly pay. There's always a way!
And any survivors, their debts I will certainly pay. There's always a way!
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Reading Static now, one passage just made me chuckle:
Does Ahruman know he owns a strip joint?There I was, slumped in a booth in Ahruman's in the north quarter of Hard Harbour, Riedquat. I swear that's the best strip joint in Galaxy One by an agricultural light year.
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Thanks to Gimi, I got an eBook in my inbox tonight (31st May 2014 - Release of Elite Reclamation)!Gimi wrote:Maybe you could start a Kickstarter Campaign to found your £4500 pledge.drew wrote:£4,500 though!<Faints>
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JazHaz wrote:Reading Static now, one passage just made me chuckle:
Does Ahruman know he owns a strip joint?There I was, slumped in a booth in Ahruman's in the north quarter of Hard Harbour, Riedquat. I swear that's the best strip joint in Galaxy One by an agricultural light year.
What happens in Riedquat stays in Riedquat.
Take an idea from one person and twist or modify it in a different way as a return suggestion so another person can see a part of it that can apply to the oxp they are working on.
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Added the link to the Oolite Stories page on the wiki.