Snake Charming

drew · Post by **drew** » Fri Feb 12, 2010 7:29 am

I sense a 'red light' moment approaching!

Enjoying. Keep it up!

Cheers,

Drew.

Website · Post by **DaddyHoggy** » Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:23 am

drew wrote:
I sense a 'red light' moment approaching!

Enjoying. Keep it up!

Cheers,

Drew.

You'd be wrong - I have something much more sneaky than that planned!

lfnfan · Post by **lfnfan** » Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:47 am

what's a 'red light moment'?

Website · Post by **DaddyHoggy** » Fri Feb 12, 2010 12:09 pm

lfnfan wrote:
what's a 'red light moment'?

Drew is referring to the potential plot device I inserted right at the beginning of the story - the gum covered red warning light indicating that the secondary manifold was out of spec...

Drew is waiting for me to write the part where the warning comes to bite him on the ass - much like the radiator hose did in the classic movie "Duel"

lfnfan · Post by **lfnfan** » Fri Feb 12, 2010 1:17 pm

aha. thx for explaining - thought it was name of a general authorly plot device, not a specific red light with gum on it plot device

Website · Post by **DaddyHoggy** » Fri Feb 12, 2010 11:20 pm

There will be a delay in the final part - RL(tm) just kicked me in the wallet - head gasket gone on my car's engine - too expensive to repair - not enough money in bank to buy a replacement - somewhat distracted - and not quite in the "zone"

Corny · Post by **Corny** » Sat Feb 13, 2010 12:20 am

I'm sorry to hear that

Hope you find a solution somehow...

Sarin · Post by **Sarin** » Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:04 am

Actually...I have a feeling that there will be a red light moment...but it will be that nasty "hostile vessel" light....

JazHaz · Post by **JazHaz** » Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:49 am

Still waiting for Part IV!

Sarin · Post by **Sarin** » Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:07 am

Don't rush it. Writing requires a right state of mind to be any good...that's what caused the long pause in my log.

drew · Post by **drew** » Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:04 am

Sarin wrote:
Don't rush it. Writing requires a right state of mind to be any good...that's what caused the long pause in my log.

Hmmm.. In my case writing definitely requires a 'state of mind', whether or not it's a 'right state of mind' is distinctly dubious in my humble opinion!

Cheers,

Drew.

Website · Post by **DaddyHoggy** » Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:01 pm

Final Parts IV and V appended to original posting.

Hope you think it was worth the wait.

JazHaz · Post by **JazHaz** » Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:09 pm

DaddyHoggy wrote:
Final Parts IV and V appended to original posting.

Hope you think it was worth the wait.

Wow, thanks DH, didn't expect what happened! Really good!

Website · Post by **DaddyHoggy** » Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:07 pm

A little editing - I expect the grammar hawks and typo tigers to descend sooner rather than later...

PS - Thanks JazHaz - perhaps Drew rubbed off on me...

Diziet Sma · Post by **Diziet Sma** » Wed Apr 07, 2010 8:55 am

Nice ending, DH.. very unexpected.. and you may just have invented a new piece of defensive equipment..

now all we need is somebody to OXP it..