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by Pansen
Thu Dec 15, 2011 2:36 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Race for the Finis...
Replies: 127
Views: 37141

Re: Race for the Finis...

Hey!

Looking very forward to this, Drew! It will be a bit of a kick for me to sort out some of my own stuff - for various reasons haven't been able to get anything done on that front in the last several months...

This is going to be great reading, I'm sure!

Happy Christmas everyone :)
by Pansen
Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:08 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Race for the Finis...
Replies: 127
Views: 37141

Re: Race for the Finis...

Good luck, Drew - looking very forward to this, and think 5K per week is doable - take it easy though! - sure no one's going to be narked if it takes a bit longer :wink: .

Very best wishes!
by Pansen
Tue Aug 30, 2011 12:54 am
Forum: Discussion
Topic: Military Ray
Replies: 4
Views: 2409

Re: Military Ray

I think so! The Dr. has kindly allowed me (and all other Ooliters) to use the Ray and his other creations in some fiction. The short story is going to be a back-story for the pilot in Petra - Sola'Kiki Miz-Miz. I've been reading up a little on Stalinist era gulags, and, in particular, the tattoos th...
by Pansen
Fri Aug 26, 2011 7:17 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Petra - back to Work In Progress status!
Replies: 25
Views: 17693

Re: Petra - Parts 6 & 7... All done now.

Hi. I've read through this quite a few times now, and I'm not very happy with the last half of the story - it feels rushed and could do with more description/explanation. Not totally convinced the whole Suki/Axel and escape part works too well, either - at least not in the way I have approached it. ...
by Pansen
Wed Aug 24, 2011 12:04 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Coyote
Replies: 68
Views: 50784

Re: Coyote

Excellent! With this and Finis coming up, we've got some great stuff to look forward to over those autumn/winter months - or summer, for the antipodean eliters! (you lucky folk! :wink: )
by Pansen
Tue Aug 23, 2011 10:48 pm
Forum: Discussion
Topic: Military Ray
Replies: 4
Views: 2409

Re: Military Ray

Cheers Disembodied - will do that.
by Pansen
Tue Aug 23, 2011 9:37 pm
Forum: Discussion
Topic: Military Ray
Replies: 4
Views: 2409

Military Ray

Hello all.

Who created the Ray Mk 1 and Military Ray? Would they have any objections to my using it in some fiction I'm working on at the moment?

Cheers.
by Pansen
Thu Aug 18, 2011 5:35 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Coyote
Replies: 68
Views: 50784

Re: Coyote

Totally agree with Wyvern- only just read this last night- loved it! Made me want to listen to some Grateful Dead n Led Zep;-). Gave up the colitas some years back, though;-). Coyote is a superb creation.
by Pansen
Tue Jul 26, 2011 11:26 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Incursio... is online
Replies: 95
Views: 36478

Re: Incursio... is online

Hey! This is superb Drew - only about half way through - slow to get started It was my reading of the novel that was slow to get started, not the novel itself, of course! - loved the physical descriptions of the Thargs and the opening with their communications/activities around the wreckage of the ...
by Pansen
Tue Jul 26, 2011 11:09 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Incursio... is online
Replies: 95
Views: 36478

Re: Incursio... is online

Hey! This is superb Drew - only about half way through - slow to get started, and wanted to read through the other novels again first. I'm reading the PDF version - don't think it's been mentioned yet (though I've only scanned through the previous messages), but pg. 53, about half way down - "J...
by Pansen
Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:02 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Petra - back to Work In Progress status!
Replies: 25
Views: 17693

Re: Petra - Part 5 now added...

Just added parts 6 and 7 - all done now, though sure there's plenty of tidying up/editing left to do.

Ran out space on the initial post, so had to paste the final parts above.

At some point, I'd like to change a few of the system names used so that they are actual Oolite planets.

Cheers!
by Pansen
Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:58 pm
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Petra - back to Work In Progress status!
Replies: 25
Views: 17693

Re: Petra - Part 5 now added...

6. Sol turned to Philips – a bemused look drawn across her face. “Well, I don’t know about Greg and Sukes, but looks like we have a doctor!?” “So it seems” replied Philips. “I can live with a doctor, but definitely could do without any more dogfights where we’re outnumbered five-to-one”, he replied...
by Pansen
Wed Jun 29, 2011 2:27 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Creative-Writing Software
Replies: 20
Views: 12029

Re: Creative-Writing Software

To be honest, I really haven't given software much of a thought - most of the stuff I've done recently (mainly writing lyrics up for my band) hasn't really required all that much other than a very basic word-processor. You're obviously way more experienced on the whole writing thing, though: I'd lik...
by Pansen
Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:55 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Creative-Writing Software
Replies: 20
Views: 12029

Re: Creative-Writing Software

Hey - very new to writing stories, but I just use Word 97! Have done for many essays/songs/reports! As for character development, I just scribbled profiles/motivations/ideas down in a scrap book. Nothing fancy. Did draw up a couple of nice-ish plans for the ships I'd be using (so I could visualize t...
by Pansen
Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:53 am
Forum: Fiction
Topic: Petra - back to Work In Progress status!
Replies: 25
Views: 17693

Re: Petra - Chp 4....

And part 5.... nearly done now...