Local Midnight in the Vacuum Bar

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Local Midnight in the Vacuum Bar

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OK, here is a (short) short story, entitled "Local Midnight in the Vacuum Bar", downloadable from Box.net, here. Comments, criticisms etc. welcome!
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Yeah its great! Have added it to the Wiki.
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Gimi wrote:
drew wrote:
£4,500 though! :shock: <Faints>
Cheers,
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Maybe you could start a Kickstarter Campaign to found your £4500 pledge. 8)
Thanks to Gimi, I got an eBook in my inbox tonight (31st May 2014 - Release of Elite Reclamation)!
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Like my favourite chocolate... dark and bitter. Good tale!
I would advise stilts for the quagmires, and camels for the snowy hills
And any survivors, their debts I will certainly pay. There's always a way!
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Good story. Thanks! :D
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