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Static
Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:33 am
by Spooky
Whilst clearing out some old kit I found some partially completed ooliterature that I was working on 3 or4 years ago. Normally I just bin this stuff but this time I though I'd have a bash at finishing it and letting you poor people "enjoy" it.
So, I suppose I'm proud to present Static -
http://int13h.com/downloads/static.pdf
Re: Static
Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 12:39 pm
by Cody
Spooky wrote:letting you poor people "enjoy" it.
So considerate of you, Spooky... thanks!
Nice little tale, btw... trouble is, it's now got me thinking about a first-person tale... bugger!
Re: Static
Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 3:47 pm
by Spooky
Nice little tale, btw... trouble is, it's now got me thinking about a first-person tale... bugger!
Thanks EV. Stop thinking, start writing... please...
Great! Just noticed a load of mistakes... Bugger
Re: Static
Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:17 pm
by Cody
Spooky wrote:Stop thinking, start writing... please...
Heh... I'm currently halfway through a twice-abandoned and re-written wip... that's why I don't need to be thinking about another tale.
I have to admit that the first person perspective is very seductive, though... next year, maybe.
Spooky wrote:Just noticed a load of mistakes... Bugger
<smirks>
Re: Static
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 2:01 pm
by JazHaz
Reading Static now, one passage just made me chuckle:
There I was, slumped in a booth in Ahruman's in the north quarter of Hard Harbour, Riedquat. I swear that's the best strip joint in Galaxy One by an agricultural light year.
Does Ahruman know he owns a strip joint?
Re: Static
Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 4:27 pm
by CommonSenseOTB
JazHaz wrote:Reading Static now, one passage just made me chuckle:
There I was, slumped in a booth in Ahruman's in the north quarter of Hard Harbour, Riedquat. I swear that's the best strip joint in Galaxy One by an agricultural light year.
Does Ahruman know he owns a strip joint?
What happens in Riedquat
stays in Riedquat.
Re: Static
Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2012 2:41 pm
by JazHaz
Added the link to the
Oolite Stories page on the wiki.