Looks absolutely superb (as do your other retextures)!
phkb wrote: ↑Wed Feb 07, 2024 4:24 am
Question: At present, you'd only see the Mark II guard if the station is attacked, not as a general replacement to Vipers. Should I make the special Pitviper Mark II the default police ship for Riredi, or leave it the way it is?
Prolonged answer:
Riredi (Vanilla game F7 text)
Government: Corporate State
Economy: Poor Industrial
Technology Level: 13
Population: 5.8 Billion (Harmless Furry Insects)
This world is very fabled for the Rirediian mountain slug.
Riredi OXP F7 text
This world is very fabled for the Rirediian mountain slug. These gigantic creatures are isles of flourishing life on the barren planet and each of them forms a complete ecosystem. Dealing with radioactives is strictly prohibited on this world because radiation is harmful to the slugs. Riredi is home of Coluber inc. and Riredisec ltd.
From the Wiki page
Riredi is home to Coluber Inc., Riredisec Ltd & the Crab-Boolean Corporation.
Coluber Inc. (Coluber Works and Shipyards Ltd.) are the manufacturers of the Coluber Racers, the Coluber Pitviper, and the Coluber HUD CH01.
Riredisec Ltd. are a well established transport company that is specialized in the transportation of larger quantities of gold, platinum and gemstones).
Crab-Boolean Corporation are the manufacturers of the CB-HUD Mark II which accounts for 40& of their sales.
Blurb on Riredisec Ltd. comes from the Coluber Blue Racer wiki page
I read Captain Beatnik's blurb (see Pitviper reference below) as intimating that Coluber Inc. does not control the Riredi system.
Bearing in mind the gradual deterioration of GalCop (and the additions to the local police by Commies & Dictators), I'd presume that Riredi/Coluber Inc. would be able to bamboozle GalCop into outfitting all local GalCop police with their local ships. Or at the very least provide the local share as Commies & Dictators do
Coluber Inc. have obviously chosen to invest a lot of their political capital/wealth in providing the local main orbital and outfitting the local police force. And the local government (about which Beatnik says little) are obviously not vetoing it, whatever their feelings. A personal decision by the MD of Coluber?
Logic behind answer: In anarchies the police force is entirely paid for by GalCop and is thus very small. In Commies and Dictatorships GalCop is augmented by the local government which wants itself to control what goes on. One presumes that the richer systems just bung more dosh into the GalCop police kitty. But they could provide ships as well. And that would help flavour some of the other systems.
Can one do anything else with this OXP in terms of marking out Riredi?
Shipyards: It's great that the PitViper is definitely for sale in the local shipyards. Is it possible to ensure that say 75% of all ships are Coluber ones (corporate monopolies)? And that PitVipers are
very rarely sold outside the system? And ditto for the Coluber Racers - 4 colours + 2 variants?
New Cargoes: Can we add in a couple of New Cargoes products based on the mountain slug? Some sort of medicine produced by Riredisec, for example? A cure for cancer, or Alzheimers would be nice. Much sought after in Ceesxe with its life-enhancement clinics and other rich human/humanoid worlds. And say another beauty product which works for say lobsters or felines? These would presumably be in rather limited quantities since the lore on Riredi's corporation does not mention them. And Riredisec would have an almost entire monopoly on transport!
Personalities There are several personalities mentioned in the Beatnik/Dizzy Lore. It would be nice to meet one or two in the system, flying a PitViper say. Could there be a chance of meeting tartan-clad Filgafel Saramant the younger "flying erratically" with his escorts (in Junta Enforcers?) either here in Riredi or back at his home in Atriso? I'd be happy to come up with some dialogue for him!
Is there anything else which can be done to make the system a bit special?
•Something else in the system? A special Rock Hermit with some unusual feature? An alien?
•Some special piece of Coluber equipment only fitable at the Main Orbital or down planet? (see "Black Racers" on Blue Racer reference below: Attitude Control System - how about an inferior fitable version which costs an arm and a leg? Or a Type-II superconductor main bus which occasionally malfunctions?)
•Something to do with local regional politics? An involvement of some sort in the civil war in Eninre?
Or Oresre? An argy-bargy between Riredisec's personalised Blue Racers & Selezen's "psuedo-Thargotic" Oresrian Traders next door?
Lore: Commander Wildefluff, Riredisec's renowned insectoid pilot, mistook an Oresrian for a Thargoid, potshotted him, and the deadly feud began. Ever since, the Oresrians have targeted mostly Riredisecian Blue Racers (escorted by Red Racers?) - and the Riredisecians have returned the honour. Could one faff a little with the NPC's - say give Oresirans better reaction times and Riredisecians better accuracy? But this one might need a
lot of work.
•Or something else entirely?
References:
Sector1/Eninre - for local systems
Riredi OXP - constructed from the other pages
Coluber Blue Racer Lots of lore here: eg: "Coluber" is a genus of fast moving, nonvenomous snakes commonly known as racers. Racers are not harmful ... ... as long as you leave them alone! But if you goad them, they become VERY aggressive. The nature of the ships Coluber Ltd. produces is similar.
Coluber Pitviper Lots of lore here too!
CB HUD Mark II A little lore on Crab-Boolean
Looking at this all, one can see that Captain Beatnik had a good feel for lore.