Recommend above OXP, very cool!
Continuity errors fixed!
Just for reference, extra scenes include:
How Rebecca began to earn her reputation as a 'flyer', the account how of she took down a fully armed Python Class Cruiser with only a Sidewinder and a pulse laser (alluded to in original version)
The race scene with the boyracers has been updated to reference the 'Tori' station and the your-ad-here adboards instead of a Coriolis station at Tianve (brings in-line with Tianve.OXP)
How and where the Agent/Assassin got his ship and how it got its name. Lines up with Mutabilis (in case you were wondering - my research led me
here.)
Agent now not surprised by the Q-Bomb detonation (continuity error with Mutabilis fixed) - we now know it was Zerz himself, and he helped develop the Q-bomb, so he shouldn't have been surprised when it exploded!
Jim's explanation of the reason he doesn't just dump the remaining Q-Bomb and make a run for it now makes more sense.
Revised section during the Thargoid encounter in witch space, clearing up why the Thargoid battleship appears at Lave.
Modified ending which clarifies why Rebecca doesn't heed Jim's advice to 'give up the revenge'
Modified epilogue, which looks grimmer than before (gets cheered up in Mutabilis!)
Cheers,
Drew.