A few more typos to brighten your day!
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Flight Controls
Starboard (right) view -- wrong font (bold? should be roman)
Galactic Hyperspace jump -- reference should be 6, not 7
Dump one cargo canister -- reference should be 7, not 6
Rotate through the manifest -- reference should be 7, not 6
Ship, System & Status Controls
Launch the ship -- shouldn't have a double-dagger (it's always available as an option in any dockable situation)
Commander's Profile -- shouldn't have a double-dagger (it's always available as an option)
Select the highlighted entry -- shouldn't have a double-dagger (redundant: if there is no option to select, then there's nothing highlighted)
Commodity Market Controls -- should have a double-dagger in the section heading (as per Carrier Market Controls). If this is done then all other double-daggers can be removed from the other entries in the section: Buy/sell maximum amount; Move cursor up/down; Buy/sell one unit of commodity
Carrier Market Controls
No double-dagger required for Carrier Market; Display the contract's destination; Move cursor up/down the list (double-dagger in section heading makes these redundant)
Notes
double-dagger entry: delete "only" (because these functions are available at other stations: not all functions are, true, but some of them are)
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Energy Banks
The multiple meters of the Energy Banks display how much energy ... -- recommend change to The multiple meters of the Energy Banks show how much energy ... ("display" can be misread here as a noun)
Shields
The front (FWD) and rear (AFT) shields where the bar length ... -- recommend change to The front (FWD) and rear (AFT) shields, where the bar length ... (original can be read as "shields where ...". Comma after "shields" separates it from the "where")
... the risk of weapons fire penetrating the shield increase. -- change to ... the risk of weapons fire penetrating the shield increases. (the risk increases, not increase)
Fuel -- possible double space between "to" and "activate" in last line.
Cabin Temperature
crews' death. -- change to crew's death ("crew" should be singular)
Laser Temperature
a cool down period -- change to cool-down or cooldown period (rather than a down period that's cool)
Missiles
First paragraph is a repeated entry for Fuel section. Replace with
These icons show what types of, and how many, missiles or other pylon-mounted devices you are carrying, and which one is active (yellow border). When a weapon has been locked on to the target, its icon turns red.
OXPs may add additional pylon based equipment -- change to OXPs may add additional pylon-based equipment (hyphenate pylon-based)
Station Aegis
vipers -- should be Vipers (capital V)
Space Compass -- wrong number. Should be 15, not 14.
Third entry: "Stations & other anchorages" -- should be "GCW Station" (other stations appear as triangles with an identifying letter, depending on the OXP ... although I do like the sound of "other anchorages"!)
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Equipment Guide
Recommend adding below: "Prices shown are those found in GCW Stations. Prices may vary in other habitats."
Additional weapons technology can be obtained ... -- change to Additional equipment can be obtained ... (not all OXP equipment is weaponry)
Legal Status
Clean, Offender and Fugitive entries: "GalCOP vipers" should be "GalCOP Vipers" (capital V)
GCW Orbital Laws
Might make more sense to group the Services first (by alphabetical order), followed by the Crimes (in alphabetical order) -- it would help to differentiate them.
Trafficking - Crime
Recommend changing "Transporting illegal commodities across member system boundaries." to "Leaving GCW Stations with illegal commodities on board." (there's nothing wrong with carrying illegal goods from one system to another; the only crime is launching from a main station with them on board)
Economy Guide
Recommend changing "Organics" to "Organics and raw materials" (to include Radioactives and Minerals)
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Game Settings
Music
The iTunes option is Mac only and will play your current iTunes playlist. -- change to The iTunes option is Mac only and will play selected iTunes playlists. (you can make playlists that will play under certain conditions, e.g. Oolite-Docked)
Spoken Messages
This feature is currently only available for the mac. -- change to This feature is currently only available for the Mac. (capital M)
Reduce Detail -- final "l" of "Detail" is roman (should be bold)
Secondary Weapon; Arm Secondary Weapon; Disarm Secondary Weapon; : change "pylon mounted" to "pylon-mounted" (hyphenate)
Cycle Secondary Weapon
weapon or equipment. -- should be weapons or equipment (weapons plural)
ECM
Electronic Counter Measures Systems -- should be Electronic Counter-Measures System (hyphenate, singular system)
Toggle ID
ID Recognition system -- should be ID Recognition System (capital S)
Roll/pitch precision toggle
I don't play with a joystick, so I don't know: is the precision toggle used to control the throttle?
View forward/aft/port/starboard
Buttons or axis's -- should be Buttons or axes (plural of axis)
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Adder
Weapons Mounts: should be F M1 (not F 1M)
Base Price: should be 65000 (not 650000)
Cobra Mk III
... and a excellent fighter/trader -- should be and an excellent fighter/trader (an, not a)
Fer-de-Lance
Weapons Mounts: should be All M2 (not All 2)
Orbital Shuttle
... this ship is the GCWs primary ... -- should be ... this ship is the GCW’s primary ... (apostrophe in GCW’s)
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Thargoid Robotic Fighter
Small remote controlled fighters ... -- should be Small remote-controlled fighters ... (hyphenate)
Viper
Ship description line should be italic
Viper Interceptor
Ship description line should be italic; "... threats of a interstellar scale." should be "... threats of an interstellar scale." (an, not a)
Worm
Ship description line should be italic
Notes
GCW shipyards will not deal in craft from unlicensed manufactures -- should be GCW shipyards will not deal in craft from unlicensed manufacturers ("manufacturers", not "manufactures")
Speed is measured in
light mach, which is the maximum velocity a ship can reach before suffering relativistic effects. -- recommend change to Speed is measured in
light mach, which is the maximum velocity a ship can reach. (physics nitpicking here: everything suffers relativistic effects all the time, but I think the speed of light in Oolite is the same speed that all ships travel at using the Torus jumpdrive, and is still an absolute limit)
Vessels agility are measured ... change to Vessels’ agilities are measured (possessive apostrophe; plural agilities)
The higher value of each letter ... -- change to The higher the value of each letter (missing "the")
Ships have a laser mounts ... -- should be Ships have laser mounts (no "a")
... mounts in the
Forward, ... -- extra space between "the" and "
Forward"?
The number of pylons are shown ... -- should be The number of pylons is shown (it's only one number of pylons per ship, so should be singular)
(Edited to conform with Eric's advice re. the Space Compass)