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Finis is available for download!

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:00 pm
by drew
Delighted (and a little bit proud) to announce that Finis is now available for download.

Launching this from the 'Coach and Horses' Pub in London with Giles, Micha, Kaks, Daddyhoggy, Drew, Ramirez, ClymAngus, another_commander, and Thargoid (and beer!) Right on, Commanders!

Once again, if you could see yourself willing to give a donation to charity given this is offered free and gratis, I'd be most appreciative.

Feedback on the story welcome below as always, in the finest traditions of the board.

... http://www.wagar.org.uk is proud to present ...

... A Creative Commons Production ...

... Part 4 of the Oolite Saga ...

... Finis ...

Cheers,

Drew.

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:08 pm
by Micha
Right On Commander!

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:14 pm
by RyanHoots
Awesome! Can't wait to read it. :D

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:23 pm
by Cmdr Wyvern
Woohoo! Downloading.

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:56 pm
by Cmdr. Maegil
Got it! Thanks, Drew! :D :D :D

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 11:40 pm
by Cmdr. Maegil
Found a typo: on page 100, last line, you have hanger instead of hangar.

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:27 am
by Selezen
Thank you for the generous credit! Much appreciated. I've never been immortalised before...

Osprey? When did I design an Osprey? :?

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:33 am
by Cmdr Wyvern
Well done Drew. Well done. :D

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:56 am
by Coyote
I didn't do it! Nobody saw me do it! You can't prove anything!

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:59 am
by Selezen
Spelling and grammar mistake alert!!

Page 65 : "‘There is no need to resort to ad hominum attacks,’ Daddyhoggy replied, with distain."

Should read: "‘There is no need to resort to ad hominum attacks,’ Daddyhoggy replied with disdain."

:-)

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:00 am
by Bugbear
Well done, Drew, a fine piece of work.
Coyote wrote:
I didn't do it! Nobody saw me do it! You can't prove anything!
Coyote, you're sombrero is missing a bullet hole !!!!

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:13 am
by RyanHoots
Bugbear wrote:
Coyote, you're sombrero is missing a bullet hole !!!!
He probably replicated a new one.*

* Too bad there are no replicators in the Ooniverse. Maybe a device that uses ship energy to produce cargo, namely food?

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 4:41 am
by Capt. Murphy
Cmdr. Maegil wrote:
Found a typo: on page 100, last line, you have hanger instead of hangar.
Ooops, I guess all the proof readers missed that one. There are six instances throughout the text where hanger appears instead of hangar.

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 7:14 am
by JensAyton
Selezen wrote:
Spelling and grammar mistake alert!!

Page 65 : "‘There is no need to resort to ad hominum attacks,’ Daddyhoggy replied, with distain."

Should read: "‘There is no need to resort to ad hominem attacks,’ Daddyhoggy replied with disdain."
FTFY.

Re: Finis is available for download!

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 7:52 am
by drew
Selezen wrote:
Thank you for the generous credit! Much appreciated. I've never been immortalised before...

Osprey? When did I design an Osprey? :?
One of these, 'Meerkat' didn't seem butch enough! :lol:

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Keep the typos rolling in folks. The proofreaders owe me a pint for everyone they didn't spot! :D

Cheers,

Drew.