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Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 7:29 am
by drew
I sense a 'red light' moment approaching!
Enjoying. Keep it up!
Cheers,
Drew.
Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:23 am
by DaddyHoggy
drew wrote:I sense a 'red light' moment approaching!
Enjoying. Keep it up!
Cheers,
Drew.
You'd be wrong - I have something much more sneaky than that planned!
Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:47 am
by lfnfan
what's a 'red light moment'?
Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 12:09 pm
by DaddyHoggy
lfnfan wrote:what's a 'red light moment'?
Drew is referring to the potential plot device I inserted right at the beginning of the story - the gum covered red warning light indicating that the secondary manifold was out of spec...
Drew is waiting for me to write the part where the warning comes to bite him on the ass - much like the radiator hose did in the classic movie "Duel"
Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 1:17 pm
by lfnfan
aha. thx for explaining - thought it was name of a general authorly plot device, not a specific red light with gum on it plot device
Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 11:20 pm
by DaddyHoggy
There will be a delay in the final part - RL(tm) just kicked me in the wallet - head gasket gone on my car's engine - too expensive to repair - not enough money in bank to buy a replacement - somewhat distracted - and not quite in the "zone"
Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 12:20 am
by Corny
I'm sorry to hear that
Hope you find a solution somehow...
Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:04 am
by Sarin
Actually...I have a feeling that there will be a red light moment...but it will be that nasty "hostile vessel" light....
Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:49 am
by JazHaz
Still waiting for Part IV!
Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:07 am
by Sarin
Don't rush it. Writing requires a right state of mind to be any good...that's what caused the long pause in my log.
Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:04 am
by drew
Sarin wrote:Don't rush it. Writing requires a right state of mind to be any good...that's what caused the long pause in my log.
Hmmm.. In my case writing definitely requires a 'state of mind', whether or not it's a 'right state of mind' is distinctly dubious in my humble opinion!
Cheers,
Drew.
Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:01 pm
by DaddyHoggy
Final Parts IV and V appended to original posting.
Hope you think it was worth the wait.
Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:09 pm
by JazHaz
DaddyHoggy wrote:Final Parts IV and V appended to original posting.
Hope you think it was worth the wait.
Wow, thanks DH, didn't expect what happened! Really good!
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:07 pm
by DaddyHoggy
A little editing - I expect the grammar hawks and typo tigers to descend sooner rather than later...
PS - Thanks JazHaz - perhaps Drew rubbed off on me...
Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 8:55 am
by Diziet Sma
Nice ending, DH.. very unexpected.. and you may just have invented a new piece of defensive equipment..
now all we need is somebody to OXP it..