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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 8:18 am
by drew
another_commander wrote:
Very nicely written story indeed. I would like to see more fiction of this style, short and twilight-zone like. Compliments, Drew.
Many thanks! I've got a handful of 'shorts' ideas in the ol' grey matter - I'll see if I can bring them to fruition. I quite like this 'I've got 4 hours to write a story' really focusses the mind... pressure makes diamonds and all that! :wink:

Cheers,

Drew.

Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 8:27 am
by lfnfan
Great short. Wicked twist. Loved it.

spotted a typo, page 9 bottom of the page
This is is, the culmination of my life's work.
should be This is _it_, the culmination of my life's work.

Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 11:05 am
by drew
Will sort - glad you enjoyed!

Cheers,

Drew.