New (very) short story - "Nine"

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Very nicely written story indeed. I would like to see more fiction of this style, short and twilight-zone like. Compliments, Drew.
Many thanks! I've got a handful of 'shorts' ideas in the ol' grey matter - I'll see if I can bring them to fruition. I quite like this 'I've got 4 hours to write a story' really focusses the mind... pressure makes diamonds and all that! :wink:

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Great short. Wicked twist. Loved it.

spotted a typo, page 9 bottom of the page
This is is, the culmination of my life's work.
should be This is _it_, the culmination of my life's work.
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Will sort - glad you enjoyed!

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