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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 9:52 pm
by DaddyHoggy
Holly: Yes Dave, they're all dead.

:D

http://www.rdwarf.co.uk/scripts1e1.html

Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 7:27 pm
by drew
Captain Hesperus wrote:
Oh gods, I'm dead aren't I.......

Captain Hesperus
Not quite! :twisted:

Cheers,

Drew.

Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 7:31 pm
by drew
I've incorporated the grammar checks etc. I will look at some of the style/formatting and more general feedback for the consolidated version at the end! Many thanks for all feedback.

Cheers,

Drew.