Lost in Transit (Novel under construction)

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Re: Lost in Transit (Novel under construction)

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staggerlee wrote: Thu Jun 12, 2014 9:22 pm
Guys, here is my first stab at Oolite fiction. In fact, it is my first stab at fiction of any kind since I was fourteen years old, so be gentle. I'd welcome feedback of any kind: critical, constructive, whatever.


Chapter One

(Download the pdf, don't read it on the Box, it compresses the font and makes it look ugly)
Just read this (thanks to Cdr Cheyd). What a shame it is only the first chapter!

Super to read about the life inside a Coriolis station....
Comments wanted:
Missing OXPs? What do you think is missing?
Lore: The economics of ship building How many built for Aronar?
Lore: The Space Traders Flight Training Manual: Cowell & MgRath Do you agree with Redspear?
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