Oolite Bulletins

DaddyHoggy wrote:

Bottom of page 88: "...Blaze look at her..." should be "Blaze looked at her..."

DaddyHoggy wrote:

Top of Page 96 - "Deep Horizon industries" should be "Deep Horizon Industries

DaddyHoggy wrote:

Page 88 to 89 is confusing, it ends with Rebecca, page 89 starts with a seemingly disconnected news story and then we discover we're back with Jim...

Cmdr Wyvern wrote:

Bum-bum-bum-ba-de-da

Attaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack of the killer nitpickers!

...and that includes me.

Frame wrote:

Love It... "Finished" it this evening... on the Desire HD in pdf format, that had small problems with the text sizes... nothing serious though.. And I think it was missing a page, without clear memory of where it was and stupid me did not note it, was to anxious getting on with the reading..

Cmdr Wyvern wrote:

He got his captaincy officially observed, and was awarded the GalCop Star of Valor for his part in the Tibecia invasion. He was offered a Naval command, but politely refused, if "I can get more done on my own than having to babysit a buncha wetpawed plebes" can be called polite.
Money? He's already quite wealthy, so doesn't much care one way or the other.
I'd have to say his primary motivation would be his own code of honor. The Bugs are a menace to his friends and family, and that just won't do. He's driven by a need to set things right.
hmm... Offer him an upgrade not found on the open market, along with the chance to be a hero yet again, and he'd be happy.

El Viejo wrote:

<bows his head briefly in awe... then howls in delight>

Great tale, Drew... a really good read.
But you getting drunk on evil juice during your speech at the launch party in IRC... well, all I can say is... 'Right on, Commander!'

Disembodied wrote:

Hi Drew, great stuff so far! (I'm only up to p62 of the PDF.) You'll be delighted to hear that I'm compiling a whole list of typos etc., which I'll email to you when I'm done ...

El Viejo wrote:

Oh well, I'll add one then... on the 'Thanks to' page, it should be 'El Viejo' instead of 'Coyote':
To Coyote: For the character of “Coyote”

drew wrote:

Cmdr Wyvern wrote:

He got his captaincy officially observed, and was awarded the GalCop Star of Valor for his part in the Tibecia invasion. He was offered a Naval command, but politely refused, if "I can get more done on my own than having to babysit a buncha wetpawed plebes" can be called polite.
Money? He's already quite wealthy, so doesn't much care one way or the other.
I'd have to say his primary motivation would be his own code of honor. The Bugs are a menace to his friends and family, and that just won't do. He's driven by a need to set things right.
hmm... Offer him an upgrade not found on the open market, along with the chance to be a hero yet again, and he'd be happy.

Cool. I've kind of got 'Coyote' in the 'code of honour' space, so I think the 'chance to be a hero yet again' might appeal!

Cheers,

Drew.

Cmdr Wyvern wrote:

He's royally pissed now, the gloves are coming off. It just became personal, and the bugs are gonna pay dearly. If at all possible he'll want to attempt a rescue regardless of risk.

There's Derik's hero moment, Drew.

El Viejo wrote:

Oh well, I'll add one then... on the 'Thanks to' page, it should be 'El Viejo' instead of 'Coyote':
To Coyote: For the character of “Coyote”