Justice for Mrs Combs part 2

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Roberto
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Justice for Mrs Combs part 2

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Voysey's investigation continues in the meaty second instalment, available here.

Apologies for taking so long to complete this btw - other matters (including commissioned writing) intervened. Hopefully parts 3 and 4 won't take quite so long to materialise! For those who missed the first instalment, you can link back to it at the bottom of the page (or via an earlier thread on this board).

As ever, thoughts/comments welcome :)
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Can't wait for the next installment!
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Post by Bill »

Excellent story, Roberto.

I believe I found a typo in Part 2.

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With the ramp down, there was only one way to get on board - through the emergency hatch at the top, if I could open it.
Shouldn't that be "With the ramp up..."?
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Post by Roberto »

Thanks guys :)

And well spotted, Bill - I've amended. (Think I was typing fairly fast at that point.)
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